this is a toned-down version of the original xD
rating: meh. it sounds rushed, sorry. Take your time next time, no need to rush c:
I suggest adding a sidechain and EQ and turning some stuff down. mixing can also be better, like cutting lows around 200hz (don't do this with sub or drums, because then it'll sound bad) (instead of for sub you can cut highs), you can look at FL Mobile mixing tutorials for this. The middle is just copy-paste of the beginning.
4/10
I hope you find this useful :D
edit: just realized it was a joke. if u have discord u should ask for stems :D
~Vort